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Advantages and disantvages of science archievement

Nowadays it’s almost impossible to live without science. We use science all the time in different aspects of our daily life. The world would be a certainly different place to live in without mobile phones, cars, computers and other gifts of science. Every day science is becoming more and more advanced , but can science archievement be a road to our own demise.

Todays science has archieved so much. Now we can cure diseases that were uncurable like maralia or yellow fever, we have better transport : planes, cars, ships,trains with it we can travel much faster, be more productive. Thanks to science, we now know more about our planet and how things work.

Though science is a major blessing to the human race, it also has its disadvantages. As man continues to advance and automate everything pollution continues to increase. The machinery developed pollutes the air, which reduces the life of man. Due to scientific advancement , people can create weapons deadlier then those we already developed.

Concisely science archievement has its advantages and disadvantages it’s up to us to decide whether we want to use to better our lives or destroy it. The future depends on how we decide to use science. Nobody knows for sure what will happen in the future or how advanced science will be in the future. We can only hope that it will be more of a blessing than a curse.

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