Anglų pratimukas. Pagelbėkit

Sveiki, galbūt kasnors galėtų padėti anglų padaryti uždavinuką? Čia tokią mažą, 50-100 žodžių istoriją reikia parašyti. Juk tikrai nesunku kas gerai mokate anglų kalbą :) Kursas 3 gimnazinė klasė. Man anglų tikrai prastai sekasi, o čia kaip ir pažymiui ... Nesvarbu ar su klaidom ar be ... (:

Užduotis:

Imagine that you were one of the survivors of the Titanic who escaped in a lifeboat. Write a short text saying what you saw and how you felt.

Jeigu saldaini duosi parasyiu :D apie 11 klase eina kalba?

Duosiu ;D Joa, 11 klasė :(

First of all, as I remember I were drinking alcohol in a bay. Then I recall hearing something like "ship wrecking" sound. Well, I didn't cared at first, and drank alcohol further. When I saw water I was in (super ultra omega) shock. Then I started running towards rescue boats. I remember falling over countless times. Then I remember, that I somehow managed to get outside, and I felt as some rock fell from my hearth.

I reached boat, got into it, and cut down the wires. Boat turned over, and since it was so heavy, I didn't managed to turn it over again. First time in my life I felt such coldness, and I passed out.

Finally I woke up, and was so (crazy)surprised that I'm alive. As I looked around me I noticed two strange things. There were golden gates, and I were standing on clouds. I noticed some half-naked human approaching me and passed out again :).

Gautum kokius aštuonis jei mokytoja humoro jausmą turi(maniškė man už tokius po devynis kala, tik teksto būna gerokai daugiau). Jei ne, tai geriau ir nenurašinėk.

P.S. gali būti šokinėjimas tarp laikų.

radau klaidelių bet tikrai labai labai tau ačiū!!!