Anglų rašinys

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One day Mark was late home from work. He was very nervous , because he stoped the police. The policeman asked him passport. The policeman examined him passport and sayd “ The passport is false”. Later policeman sayd “It is just a mistake , but tonight you must go to commissariat “.

At senen o’clock Mark was at home. Mark’s wife Laura was very angry, because Mark was late for supper.

When Mark got home he do two tings. Firstly he took him gun , later he took a diamond from safe.

Later Mark went into the bedroom and telephoned Dylan. Dylan sayd “ I will go to your house and then we talk” . Mark took him briefcase with 10.000 $ cash and go at the front door. When Mark was near front door he sayd “My darling Laura evrythig will be allright”. But Laura didn’t believed. Later somebody knocked at the front door . It was Dylan. He sayd “We must go to the airport”. And they went to the airport. Laura was very anxious . She telephoned Kate , and told everything .

It was just a Laura’s nightmare.

Klaidu klaideliu cia pas tave...

but tonight you must go to commissariat “.

Nice one 6:heart: Primena mano anglų mokytoją, kuri pati susikuria žodžius.

Geras, čia kaip filme apie mafiją, tik su labai netikėta pabaiga 6:heart:

One day Mark was late home from work. He was very nervous, because he was stopped by the police. The policeman asked him for the passport. The policeman examined his passport and said, "The passport is fake". Later policeman said, "It is just a mistake, but tonight you must go to the police-station".

At seven o’clock Mark was at home. Mark’s wife Laura was very angry, because Mark was late for supper.

When Mark got home he did two things. First he took his gun, then a diamond from safe.

Later Mark went to the bedroom and telephoned Dylan. Dylan said, "I will come to your house and then we'll talk" . Mark took his briefcase with $10.000 cash and went to the front door. When Mark was near the front door he told Laura, "My darling, everything will be alright". But Laura didn’t believe that. Later somebody knocked at the front door. It was Dylan. He said, "We must go to the airport". And they went to the airport. Laura was very anxious . She telephoned Kate, and told her everything.

It was just Laura’s nightmare.

Savotiškas rašinukas 6:heart: senen-seven, sayd-said ir etc. Čia ne rašinys, o kratinys. Perrašyk.

but tonight you must go to commissariat “.

Nice one 6:heart: Primena mano anglų mokytoją, kuri pati susikuria žodžius.

Toks žodis kaip ir yra 2:heart:

Beje, siūlau pasimokyti laikus, pasyvą ir šiaip visą gramatiką pakartot 4:club:

per anglona ziurejau yra zodis toks:D nu gerai nesityciokit , nesiseka man su anglu...

Pataisiau ką užmačiau.

One day Mark was late home from work. He was very nervous , because he was stopped by police. The policeman asked him to show his passport. The policeman examined his passport and said “ The passport is false”. Later policeman said “It is just a mistake , but tonight you must go to commissariat “.

At seven o’clock Mark was at home. Mark’s wife Laura was very angry, because Mark was late for supper.

When Mark got home he did two things. Firstly he took him gun, later he took a diamond from safe.

Later Mark went into the bedroom and telephoned Dylan. Dylan said “I will go come to your house and then we talk”. Mark took his briefcase with 10.000 $ cash and went to the front door. When Mark was near front door he said “My darling Laura everything will be all right”. But Laura didn’t believe. Later somebody knocked at the front door. It was Dylan. He said “We must go to the airport”. And they went to the airport. Laura was very anxious. She telephoned Kate, and told everything.

It was just a Laura’s nightmare.

Toks žodis kaip ir yra 6:heart:

Beje, siūlau pasimokyti laikus, pasyvą ir šiaip visą gramatiką pakartot 2:heart:

Tai dar nereiškia, kad jis čia tinka. 4:club:

It was just Laura’s nightmare.

Pataisiau ką užmačiau.

 

One day Mark was late home from work. He was very nervous , because he was stopped by police. The policeman asked him to show his passport. The policeman examined his passport and said “ The passport is false”. Later policeman said “It is just a mistake , but tonight you must go to commissariat “.

At seven o’clock Mark was at home. Mark’s wife Laura was very angry, because Mark was late for supper.

When Mark got home he did two things. Firstly he took him [his] gun, later he took a diamond from safe.

Later Mark went into the bedroom and telephoned [phoned?] Dylan. Dylan said “I will go come[wtf?] to your house and then we talk”. Mark took his briefcase with 10.000 $ cash and went to the front door. When Mark was near front door he said “My darling Laura everything will be all right”. But Laura didn’t believe. Later somebody knocked at the front door. It was Dylan. He said “We must go to the airport”. And they went to the airport. Laura was very anxious. She telephoned Kate, and told everything.

It was just a Laura’s nightmare.

It was just a Laura’s nightmare. [Čia baigiamoji mintis?]